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2) The viewers were very happy with my pitch and saw the improvement. They enjoyed the aliveness and my body language. The viewers felt engaged and were not bored. They enjoyed the background in the second pitch, so I kept that.
3) I did not change too much. I felt like my second pitch went really well and was even better than my third one. Maybe it was because I was sick recently and could not bring the full performance. I tried to be more happy and smiley, to give a friendlier impression. But yes, the pitch definitely flows extremely well now and I could bring it any time of the day in any situation. It feels good and I enjoy saying it.
Good morning Steve,
ReplyDeleteI thought this elevator pitch was the best one yet. I feel that you improved your pitch in all aspects. This includes but is not limited to your delivery, main points, and organization. Your hook really got my attention and you kept me interested throughout the entire pitch. Great job on taking our comments and improving your pitch based on them.
Hello Steve, this was such a great elevator pitch, after watching all of them, I truly believe that you have grown in your skills. I really did not feel bored at all and I was very engaged in everything you had to say. You had a great opener and you had my attention all the way until the end. You really delivered on this elevator pitch!
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